Rainbow Factory

You've all heard of it. Many of you have read it. Others refuse to look at it.

I used to be part of the others. But then i saw a comic of one scene. WARNING: All Spoilers Tags mean REAL SPOILERS!

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I saw that comic and i was like... But... What happens next? You can't end on a cliffhanger like THAT!!!

So today i read the book. and i was expecting to be, Angry, disgusted, sick, enraged. But instead i was...

Disappointed.

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That Comic IS THE ENDING!

I was so disapointed. There were so many ways they could have ended it. My thoughts were:

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We get an emotional death.
or Scoot's breaks free.
or what i think would have been better.
Rainbow says Scootaloo can join her team after seeing her flying skills and after the compliment she starts to care for her again. But scoot's says go to hell, then rainbow kills her.

But here's my short review of it. It's a short story and only took me (a slow reader) 45 mins to finish it. i did have to re-read parts because i didn't understand what was happening in the story, the details of where they were and the discription of the machine felt very... undetailed. really, i couldn't even imagine the machine or what was happening on with it. and i have a strong imagination. i dunno, maybe just me. The story itself, i understood it and tells a nice GRIM DARK tale of the darker side to Equestria.

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The psycho, insane, monsterous Rainbow Dash was probably the most interesting character in this whole story, until she starts ripping ponies apart with her bare hooves. that was just... silly.

however the ending was lacking and could have been alot more.

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In your mind, you know what happens next. She gets killed, but really? We couldn't be told? ANYTHING could have happened at that end tho, it's wide open for any rookie writer to make a sequel. BUT THIS STORY SHOULDN'T HAVE ONE. Scootaloo should have had a defiant death and then The End. The Secret remains safe.

A rating for this story? 2 out of 5. A story that would only be interesting for the gore lovers. There's no deep emotional story here, nore do you feel a connection to the OC characters. You don't even get a chance to know them. But again, Short story, no time for character development.

So yes, Those worried that this story might make you disgusted or anything. I wasn't, and i love Scootaloo.

I'm glad you read it, I know i wouldn't have.
Blood and Gore in a game = Win
Blood and Gore with Ponies? = Wrong and Cruel In my opinion
Yeah, I havn't heard anything of this comic this just hit me out of the blue but from what you say, It sounds like you didn't like it.
Am I right in saying your read it to find out what happens NEXT only to find out that there is no NEXT only a BEFORE?
Am I also right in saying I don't know what i'm talking about and that my context is hard to read?
Am I also right in saying i'm very colourful today?

Mr Bumbles wrote:

I'm glad you read it, I know i wouldn't have.
Blood and Gore in a game = Win
Blood and Gore with Ponies? = Wrong and Cruel In my opinion
Yeah, I havn't heard anything of this comic this just hit me out of the blue but from what you say, It sounds like you didn't like it.
Am I right in saying your read it to find out what happens NEXT only to find out that there is no NEXT only a BEFORE?
Am I also right in saying I don't know what i'm talking about and that my context is hard to read?
Am I also right in saying i'm very colourful today?

You'll find the Spoiler box in the Others box, but yeah, i was disapointed because i never got that i set out to get.

Whelp, I've heard of it, but of course, I'll never. F*cking. Read it. Ever.

I've already seen scenes from a comic based on Cupcakes, and I got physically ill looking at it.

I'm content with 'Rainbow Factory' by WoodenToaster.

The movie was better

Sadly, it was the first fanfic I have ever read for MLP... I am still having nightmares about rainbows and I can never look at Rainbow Dash the same ever again...

It was boring to tell you the truth

just an evil raindow dash kills ponies to make raindows nothing that awesome or cool about it