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PostSubject: Rainbow Factory   Rainbow Factory Empty4/9/2012, 5:59 am

You've all heard of it. Many of you have read it. Others refuse to look at it.

I used to be part of the others. But then i saw a comic of one scene. WARNING: All Spoilers Tags mean REAL SPOILERS!

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I saw that comic and i was like... But... What happens next? You can't end on a cliffhanger like THAT!!!

So today i read the book. and i was expecting to be, Angry, disgusted, sick, enraged. But instead i was...

Disappointed.

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I was so disapointed. There were so many ways they could have ended it. My thoughts were:

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But here's my short review of it. It's a short story and only took me (a slow reader) 45 mins to finish it. i did have to re-read parts because i didn't understand what was happening in the story, the details of where they were and the discription of the machine felt very... undetailed. really, i couldn't even imagine the machine or what was happening on with it. and i have a strong imagination. i dunno, maybe just me. The story itself, i understood it and tells a nice GRIM DARK tale of the darker side to Equestria.

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however the ending was lacking and could have been alot more.

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A rating for this story? 2 out of 5. A story that would only be interesting for the gore lovers. There's no deep emotional story here, nore do you feel a connection to the OC characters. You don't even get a chance to know them. But again, Short story, no time for character development.

So yes, Those worried that this story might make you disgusted or anything. I wasn't, and i love Scootaloo.

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PostSubject: Re: Rainbow Factory   Rainbow Factory Empty4/9/2012, 6:19 am

I'm glad you read it, I know i wouldn't have.
Blood and Gore in a game = Win
Blood and Gore with Ponies? = Wrong and Cruel In my opinion
Yeah, I havn't heard anything of this comic this just hit me out of the blue but from what you say, It sounds like you didn't like it.
Am I right in saying your read it to find out what happens NEXT only to find out that there is no NEXT only a BEFORE?
Am I also right in saying I don't know what i'm talking about and that my context is hard to read?
Am I also right in saying i'm very colourful today?
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PostSubject: Re: Rainbow Factory   Rainbow Factory Empty4/9/2012, 6:39 am

Mr Bumbles wrote:
I'm glad you read it, I know i wouldn't have.
Blood and Gore in a game = Win
Blood and Gore with Ponies? = Wrong and Cruel In my opinion
Yeah, I havn't heard anything of this comic this just hit me out of the blue but from what you say, It sounds like you didn't like it.
Am I right in saying your read it to find out what happens NEXT only to find out that there is no NEXT only a BEFORE?
Am I also right in saying I don't know what i'm talking about and that my context is hard to read?
Am I also right in saying i'm very colourful today?

You'll find the Spoiler box in the Others box, but yeah, i was disapointed because i never got that i set out to get.

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PostSubject: Re: Rainbow Factory   Rainbow Factory Empty4/9/2012, 3:23 pm

Whelp, I've heard of it, but of course, I'll never. F*cking. Read it. Ever.

I've already seen scenes from a comic based on Cupcakes, and I got physically ill looking at it.

I'm content with 'Rainbow Factory' by WoodenToaster.

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PostSubject: Re: Rainbow Factory   Rainbow Factory Empty4/9/2012, 3:30 pm

The movie was better
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PostSubject: Re: Rainbow Factory   Rainbow Factory Empty16/5/2013, 2:53 pm

Sadly, it was the first fanfic I have ever read for MLP... I am still having nightmares about rainbows and I can never look at Rainbow Dash the same ever again... Fluttercry

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PostSubject: Re: Rainbow Factory   Rainbow Factory Empty17/5/2013, 3:12 am

It was boring to tell you the truth

just an evil raindow dash kills ponies to make raindows nothing that awesome or cool about it

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