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PostSubject: The Eversleep and other stories.   27/2/2012, 3:01 pm

So I mentioned I have written Fanfiction. A lot of it.

My first ever fanfiction is The Eversleep, which is also on EQD, though the link isn't on here. I managed it as a five-star story, but I will be going back to revise the whole thing - I didn't think it was as well written as it could have been.

Its sequel, Endless Sky is a lot longer, in progress, and much, much better in terms of writing. You could hop right into that one instead of reading the first, but I dunno how much would be missed. It is also on EQD under The Eversleep.


Uh. Happy reading, if you choose to go for it (be warned, its about 85,000 words at the moment). Let me know what you think.

Also, warning. It is grimdark. If you don't like that stuff, I suggest against reading it, as it is fairly sad as well.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eversleep and other stories.   27/2/2012, 3:20 pm

i havnt read much of it but the eversleep seems to be righten pretty well with a good style and are both of them grim dark?

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PostSubject: Re: The Eversleep and other stories.   27/2/2012, 3:31 pm

Yup. The first one is pretty rushed feeling. Making the second one longer was the best decision I ever made, and it'll probably carry over to the rewrite.

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