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PostSubject: A Quick Comment and a Fanfiction for All.   25/4/2012, 9:45 am

I gotta say, I think Soul Hook was right when he told me that I should 'expand' with my stories and join other site groups in order to get them some coverage. I just hope that they accept them.

This is my first ever MLP fanfic: Hunter of the Passion. Very good chance I will delete it and start all over with it, unless I get some positive feedback or at least a review.

It tells the story of an alicorn named Revenant Hunter and his daughter, Passion Spirit, and how they try to live their own lives, but when you are one of the alicorns, especially one with dark colors, ponies will be wary. Join them as they try to become part of the semi-normal community of Ponyville.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/11967/Hunter-of-the-Passion

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PostSubject: Re: A Quick Comment and a Fanfiction for All.   25/4/2012, 10:03 am

you should have introduced yourself first, instead of just trying to get attention

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PostSubject: Re: A Quick Comment and a Fanfiction for All.   25/4/2012, 10:11 am

Uh, sorry. Guess I got ahead of myself there.

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PostSubject: Re: A Quick Comment and a Fanfiction for All.   25/4/2012, 10:16 am

I demand more!
Just finished chapter three and I'm really enjoying where the story is going, I can see why you have the mature tag.
Oh celestia, you and your golden shoes..

Pony with a fedora. Where have you been all my life..

Anyway, as I said I like the transition between what's happening in the past and at the same time the present, are we not meant to know of him being an alicorn yet? Or is that coming in a future chapter?
Grammars good, tenses are fine. All in all was a pleasure to read and hoping for more (:
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PostSubject: Re: A Quick Comment and a Fanfiction for All.   25/4/2012, 10:28 am

AlGreat wrote:
you should have introduced yourself first, instead of just trying to get attention

I think Al's just trying to get you to introduce himself so he can start spamming your introduction thread.

Regardless, though, he's right. You should make a post in the introduction thread before giving us your fanfiction. It's common courtesy.

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PostSubject: Re: A Quick Comment and a Fanfiction for All.   25/4/2012, 10:41 am

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AlGreat wrote:
you should have introduced yourself first, instead of just trying to get attention

I think Al's just trying to get you to introduce himself so he can start spamming your introduction thread.

Regardless, though, he's right. You should make a post in the introduction thread before giving us your fanfiction. It's common courtesy.


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