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PostSubject: Lunar lament   16/4/2012, 1:30 am

I wanted to do a song about Lunas sorrow while being trapped on the moon inside a demon horse entity, i got the instrumental track done http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?bgurzwsr6144d7y
but I cant figure out the lyrics even though I kinda have an idea of what I want. So if you wanna give it a try write some lyrics and sing away

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PostSubject: Re: Lunar lament   16/4/2012, 3:29 am

Dear duck licker , I wish to have some of skills inside our collab add me on skype to talk more :D

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PostSubject: Re: Lunar lament   16/4/2012, 3:48 am

Its awesome, i love that cello

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PostSubject: Re: Lunar lament   16/4/2012, 4:17 am

Okay, I'm gonna be honest here...I don't like the drum patterns here. Specifically, the double-bass you have going on at some parts. It just...doesn't fit. The actual drums sounds themselves are fine, but the sequences are just too heavy to fit the more mellow mood of the song. Unless you wanted a sort of aggressive drum track, then I can understand why you put it in there, but I personally don't like it. I'm also not too fond of some of the synth samples you have - particularly the ones around 2:05. They're just too grating on the ears.

With all that said, however, this is some stellar work you've got here. Just change a couple of the instruments around and you have yourself quite a nice little track.

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PostSubject: Re: Lunar lament   16/4/2012, 4:45 am

@ tomzie: im honored :D
@ nevel: awesome dude thanks,
@ Al thanks man glad you liked it

@ cloud

yeah Im an addict to the double kick and was going for an aggressive drum track, but now that you mention it and listening to it again yeah, a bit too aggressive for some parts, thanks.

as for the synths i can see your point, I listen to some music that doesnt use what you may call "pleasant" sounds in theyr songs so i guess im a bit desensitized in that way, i will tweak around with them see what i can do. I was trying to have a synth being a bit harsh representing nightmare moon and one sweet like luna :roll:


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PostSubject: Re: Lunar lament   16/4/2012, 5:05 am

I listened, and I did like it but it doesn't quite seem like what you said it was supposed to be. It doesn't seem sad in the slightest to me, though that could change if you add your lyrics to it, idk. To me it sounded less like a sad pony on the moon and more like a troubled pony, pondering how to confront a great task - such as saving a captured princess from space invaders - and ultimately gathering with her friends as they all set of on an exciting adventure.

Sounds good, but so far it's not sad.

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